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Slaughterhouse Five by Kurt VonnegutMotherless Brooklyn by Jonathan LethemPastoralia by George Saunders
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Hello Sean, Thank you so much for reading through FTM and for your h....
Hey sean, Thanks for the read and the remarks. I really do appreci....
Thanks so much for your commentary! I know I need a good edit--I'm st....
Most of your questions are answered in the next chapter :) I do ta....
Sean, thanks so much for those comments. That 2nd chapter is causing....
Hi Paul- So far I've read up to ch. 8 and this is excellent. You've done a great job of capturing Sam's inner world, and the plot is suspenseful. I'm interested to see what happens next. My one criticism is this: the exclamation points irritated me. Your writing is good enough that I get when so... view book
Simon-So far I've only read the first two chapters. I found the first chapter to be excellent. Your descriptions are well written and engrossing. The first accident sets up a feeling of anxiety about what was going to happen, which made me want to read more. After that, the second chapter really... view book
I just finished reading this and so far it's excellent. I can perfectly imagine each character. Don't know if I have any major criticisms for it as there's not that much up. Good luck getting it published, I'd love to read more. view book