Wow! what a unique and interesting beginning! I only read the first chapter, but was immediately drawn in. The prayers your character recited inspired me. I love how you made the prayers more like personal pleas and heartfelt conversations with God rather than rituals, even if they are rituals. You ... view book

Hi Shelby! This is a very creative and interesting piece of work! I always love a good tale on the high seas, and the fact that it's a story based on Christian values only makes it better. You descriptions are excellent and the story flows smoothly. You did well with the action too. :) Six stars a... view book

Your long pitch drew me in, and though I only had time to read the first chapter, I was intrigued! Who are these monsters, and how will Nyiri's opinion of them change once she gets to know them? I've starred and added it to my watchlist. I look forward to reading more of this story! Sarala Hope Re... view book

I absolutely loved this tale!! I instantly cared about Fin from the beginning, and drew closer to Peter and Bartimaeus as I continued to read on. I suppose, since you didn't upload the rest of the book on here, I'll have to buy it. :) This story deserves all stars. Thanks for the good read! Saral... view book

Hysterical!! only read the first chapter, but I loved it! WL for further reading. Keep it up! :) view book