Pierre, This is fantastic, congratulations, I read for a while but need to leave, (I've been in France writing, and alas must return home today). I got to the end of Chapter Two. I love it, and all the while want to know what's happening even more. Its a gripper. I need to read more in an attempt... view book

Just read chapter five. Its definitely a strong concept. Keep going with it. Her 'thoughts' are really quite irritating though, strip them out where you can. For example: 'I'm alive, so what the hell is going on here' Try deleting that completely . You don't need it. Sharpen up the dialogue al... view book

Hello, horrible late with this review, sorry. I haven't been on the site for ages, (long story but it wouldn't make a good novel). Anyway, I read up until chapter 4. I wasn't really sure what to explect from the tile. I understand the idea of the records and so I wondered what you were going to d... view book

hi, I've just got back to check out your new chapter one (sorry, didn't see you message). I still like this, even more so for a second reading, I'm shelving it. Its really got something, Wiz is very strong, understated, yet compelling. good luck with it, Julie view book

ooh its a bit violent isn't it? - good writing, tight dialogue and authentic feel generally. Its also very visual, graphic, (especially the violent bits!). I could do with a little less dialect but I know its a fine balance, something that probably varies from reader to reader. Also I'm English, whi... view book