Well done. This flows easily, and presents an engaging heroine from the start. Best of luck to you! view book

What a fantastic style you have! I am not usually drawn to this kind of work, but the way you tell the story is irresistible. It's a sort of fearless, uninhibited writing. I love it. Shelved. view book

Engrossing from the start. Your idea is fresh, and the telling reels us in. Just occasionally, the dialogue slips out of joint, but on the whole I love what I've read. I shelved you to begin with for your killer pitch, but you're staying shelved because the story lives up to it. Best of luck. ... view book

Very vivid imagery! I was shivering after two paragraphs. My only comment would be to watch out for the curse of over-description which assails us all from time to time. Sometimes the prose seems a little too dense. But it is intriguing---and enjoyable! Best of luck! Hanna view book

Andrew, Excellent! I love what I've read so far. After just a few chapters, Gareth has me hooked: he's likeable, sympathetic, and engaging, but still shrouded in enough mystery to keep me eagerly flipping pages. (Or, in this case, clicking pages.) I think the premise is fabulous, and oozing p... view book