Entertaining, well-paced and well-written...and I don't know if it's intentional, but your pitch made me laugh so hard. Its not an insult, but the whole story sound wonderfully mad and ludicrous...in a good way! This is by far the best pitch i have seen on here. i would buy this book in a second ... view book

Really enjoyed this. Loved the pace and detail or the narration. Felt like a proper deep-space sci-fi story, nicely capturing the crew and their interactions and roles on the ship. The whole thing felted grounded in reality whic was great. Only crit i have is that i think you need to abbreviate... view book

Great piece of work. I haven't read fantasy for years now but i'd give this a go. I thought your writing was beautifully rich and detailed but still easy to read. Great stuff! Only criticism I have is the pitch, but thats just down to my personal taste. I found it a bit too convoluted with to... view book

I thought this was a very well written, good piece of work. Though the dialogue was fine and did its job i did find it rather dull. Thats just me though, i prefer it when dialogue drives the plot as well as establishing characters and their relationships to each other. I am only commenting on the... view book

This is a point I picked up on too, but hadn't fixed it yet. I have now amended the passage to explain why he attacks the men. Thanks for reminding me it needed fixing! view book