There are only four chapters posted, you pussy. Where are the rest of them? Loved it. Go get 'em, big man. Scuts Locked and Loaded view book

This is one of the finest and most polished stories I've read here (read anywhere). Not only is there a hook always there to drag me around the corner, but the dialogue and characters pop out and practically sit on my lap. The plot is highly original, the characters are very well drawn, and the cade... view book

Hi David. I agree with jfredlee. This is some pretty tight prose. Although I must admit I'm not a football fan, this story would be just as compelling if it were a baseball player, hockey, or any other sport where there is a defined shelf life before the long slow coast into oblivion. Although the p... view book

William, I read twenty chapters of this now, and thought it was finally time to leave a comment. I've been stealing moments whenever I could to read 'Faust's B'. I've come to the realization that, aside from the perfect word for the perfectly sculpted sentence, it's what you skirt or allude to that ... view book

You've changed how I look at fiction. This comment's gonna be way too short, and no one else will probably even notice it anyway, so here goes: Your punctuation is perfect; your imagination and depth of imagery is off-the-fucking charts-awesome; and this has to be the most intriguingly layered tale ... view book