This is an unvarnished, heart-on-your-sleeve story, the virtues of which are the clean, straightforward writing style that effectively promotes exactly the sort of human connection promised in the pitch. Backed. view book

Catchy premise – the counterpoint of begging/charity within a story of adultery I would rearrange the first chapter to start with “I was brought up to believe. . .” It is such a strong statement and the first to really grab me. I liked the rest, just thought the entry of the story better served ... view book

The whole expression of the little girl’s faith I found quite credible. . .I can imagine you struggling with it. . as an adult writer attempting to layout a story. . .but it resonates with my faith memories as a child. I think you did it! CH2 . . .she had been accompanied – wonderful phrase ... view book

I read CH1 & 2, then 14. . . to see how you conjoined the magical properties of the first to the real life of the second. I must say, CH14 made me want to read the rest! One of the things I most enjoyed about the first chapter was the neat contrast between the brother and the sister. . .that alrea... view book

This book just snaps. The verve, clarity and polish of the writing is very professional Backed. view book