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** UPDATES **
Restructure has begun and my thorough editing has given A Candle's End some very satisfying results.
So far I've fine-polished the first 10 chapters, and I will post the changes/additions here:

All chapters are going through a major restructuring as to point of views, dialogs, grammar-correction and some extra additions.

Added a whole new scene to chapter 5, showing Catalina and her crew in the desert, looking for the escaped Kael.

Added a funny addition to the struggle with Kael and the little halfling in chapter 6.

Changed the rumor from of the Valley of Shadows to a more reasonable and exciting one in chapter 6.

Changed the pursuit of Mike and Kael in the Slum District to be longer, more intriguing and more interesting in chapter 7.

Added more descriptive details to the opening scene in chapter 8.

Changed the trial in chapter 10 - now it is actually interesting and not easy for Mike and his friends to get Riley executed.

Those are the major changes - besides that I've removed and added a lot, too much to mention it here.


~PROFILE~

Hi, I'm Robert Eetheart. 20 years old.

As a young and almost a brand new writer, I'm more than grateful for any advices you might have for me.

I've been writing some small stories, but never actually finished a book, until now, where I'm doing a book and it's serious this time. I love writing and reading about fiction, adventure/fantasy.

In my everyday life, I'm a Jesus Freak! :) I love to hang out with friends and just do whatever there's to do of fun and great things! :)

Hope to talk with ya'll and share some advices.

If I would recommend any published books, I would definitely tell you to read the "Legend of Drizzt" series! :)

If you want to contact me for questions or as an agent / publisher, here's my email: eetheart@mail.com
You can also find me on twitter as @Eetheart

I've been given dozens of advices to read and write my butt off. So, I can only tell you the same :) AND, I write best with inspirational music, which is instrumental (cuz' I write fantasy/adventure), so that's an advice from me as well :) For instance, if you're doing a fighting scene, find a song that goes wild and loop it. Romance scene, find a romantic, instrumental song, loop it, etc, etc :) IT HELPS ALOT, really does! :)

favourite books

The Bible - God's Word
Legend of Drizzt - R.A. Salvatore
The Hunter's Blades Trilogy - R.A. Salvatore
The Sellswords - R.A. Salvatore
Transitions - R.A. Salvatore
The Cleric Quintet - R.A. Salvatore
Jesus Freaks - DC Talk
Burn - Ted Dekker
Blink - Ted Dekker
The Chronicles of Narnia - C.S. Lewis
Inkheart - Cornelia Funke
Serenity: The Shepherd's Tale - Chris Samnee
Left Behind - Tim Lahaye & Jerry B. Jenkins
Crazy Love - Francis Chan
Forgotten God - Francis Chan
A Wizard of Earthsea - Ursula K. Le Guin
The Books of Ember - Jeanne DuPrau
Waterdeep - Ed Greenwood & Elaine Cunningham
Conquering Demons - Christian Hedegaard
Experiencing prayer with Jesus - Henry & Norman Blackaby
Against All Odds - Chuck Norris

my websites

http://eetheart.blogspot.com     http://www.facebook.com/Eetheart

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A Candle's End

Robert Eetheart

In the Land of Jaaras, a kingless era has begun. Three destinies are about to be formed, secrets revealed and deceptions multiplied...


In a distant realm called "Amaara"... The Dominant War has ended and peace finally reigns the Land of Jaaras. Three different humans have been given a great task, yet they don't know it. Mike, a simple farmer, Kael, a hardened sailor, and Jill, a cold thief, have all begun an unstoppable journey in a kingless and chaotic time, where danger lurks at every corner.

Drahk, the evil warlord, was thought dead after the Dominant War. But the rumors and the gathering of orcs from the south tell differently. And what about a famous heroine whose tale was that she slew the evil Drahk and witnessed the death of the last king of Jaaras - what part in all this did she have?

The seven kingdoms of Jaaras have all fallen to dust - all but the capital of Dakain, which still stands, trying to maintain a balance of order in these ruthless times.
Hope is left with the three adventurers. They have forsaken their pasts behind and strive forward towards a new life; which may be more painful than they had hoped.

 

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I wrote 41 days ago

Christine! :) You changed the first few paragraphs in the beginning and I love it! You used like a few lines to make such a beautiful and rich scene, good job! :) Don't be afraid to "alter" other parts too :) You're doing a great piece of work here :) Robert Eetheart A Candle's End view book

I wrote 63 days ago

Hi Shelby. I must say your book is quite something! :) Very exciting story, a lovely pace, and great characters! :) Wow, should your book make it on print, I'd definitely be dared to buy it! :) I like the way you make a scene rich with few words and not many sentences. Rated 5 and backed! :) ... view book

I wrote 107 days ago

Backed and rated 6 stars, just because! :) It's a great story you're developing here, and I must disagree with certain people - this is not like Twilight. Sure, it may have some of the elements, but you've created something in your own style. I wouldn't want to compare it too much with other nove... view book

I wrote 212 days ago

I love your new cover, Ivan! :) The pitch simply grabs my attention and I can only commend your work here! :) Great job, Ivan, I'm sure your book will rise the ladder very, very soon, to the top! view book

I wrote 265 days ago

So simple a name, Mike, yet so unique his call is - A hero, struggling with the many losses, he's about to face. Will he prevail? Or will he fall in the dark hole of despair? Read on and find out. A Candle's End - Only the first of three books. view book

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