Okay. I've read the first three chapters. Love this Douglas. You set up the story so well; this is a real page-turner. The writing, like the plot, is very tight. Love the way it's broken into Now, Then, Before sections. Believable dialogue, great characterisation - what's not to like? Oh, I did spo... view book

Can I make a minor suggestion before I get stuck in? Your pitch would read so much better if you added a comma after 'As his profile grows' view book

excellent. read more chapters today. Alison, this is a great read. A tight plot along with really well-written characters. Nothing to add, really, except that I love this. Sheila view book

Hi Alison dipping in and will be back later with more comments. A great pitch although I stumbled over the para beginning, 'When the dead girls' lover...' the whole sentence is too long and I had to read several times before I realised what you were saying. The punctuation made me think there was a... view book

Ooh how intriguingly different this one is. Read the first two chapters and will be back for more. On my shelf in the meantime Sheila view book