Hi Terry, I Looooooove your opening narrative. Your raw voice and sarcastic flare make the sunny dayz sparkle as though magic dust drifts through the air and fills our imagination. And how refreshing for poems to be cheerful. Certainly, you have attracted this female. Job well done. On my ... view book

Hi Terry, I Looooooove your opening narrative. Your raw voice and sarcastic flare make the sunny dayz sparkle as though magic dust drifts through the air and fills our imagination. And how refreshing for poems to be cheerful. Certainly, you have attracted this female. Job well done. On my ... view book

Hi SAStirling. Outstanding tale of a broken heart and a passonate protagonist. Thoroughly researched and masterfully crafted. Flawless prose and eloquent style. On my shelf, no doubt! Best wishes, Janet Marie view book

Section two is flawless up to the part where they list the current topics. At that point, it became a lot of information expected to be grapsed quickly and fully with little description. (on the possibility of pestilence...) Suggest deleting the dash before Does any of it matter? Noticed an extr... view book

Outstanding first sentence. Sets the mood and provides a strong setting. For me, the second and third sentences were clumsy. Maybe you don't need the Easy girl- but it tells the reader that Munro is kind and caring. I expected to see a comma with the name of who spoke, which I think would make... view book