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I am UK based, and have had a few bits and pieces published and/or performed.
I joined the site because I believe that here, I might find other writers who are keen to to give and receive constructive criticism. So far, I have not been disappointed.
However, please don't ask me to read fantasy, vampires, paranormal or science fiction; I have tried these but become frustrated with unfamiliar context and language. Also, please only send your work if you have posted a number of detailed crits/feedback comments on the work of other authonomy members.
Thanks to all those people who helped me navigate the site on joining and those who commented on my uploaded chapters so far.
Chris

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favourite books

Altogether by Somerset Maugham. A collection of thirty short stories.
The Cruel Sea by Nicholas Monsarrat.
Burnt Shadows by Kamila Shamshie.
Ordinary Thunderstorms by William Boyd.
Alone in Berlin by Hans Fallada.
Ladysmith by Giles Foden.

The Book of Negroes byLawerence Hill.
The Help by Kathryn Stockett.
(I suggest reading these two together.)

The Post Office by Charles Bukowski
Catch 22 by Joseph Heller.
Love is a Many Splendoured Thing by Han Suyn.
Future Tense by Gwynne Dyer.
Smilla's Sense of Snow by Peter Hoeg.
Treasure Island by Robert Louis Stevenson.
A farewell to Arms by Ernest Hemmingway.
Swallows and Amazons by Arthur Ransome.
Lost by Lucy Wadham.
Thirty Nine Steps by John Buchan.
The Informed Heart by Bruno Bettelheim.
The Cat Who Walked by Himself by Rudyard Kipling.
the Innocent by Ian McEwan.
From Here to Eternity by James Jones.

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Different Victims

Chris White

Ray and Farhaz are victims, each determined by unusual circumstances. The old man and the teenage boy resolve their own situations – alone.


Ray and Farhaz are a two-man self-help group. Farhaz carries Ray's cases of beer from the local shop and Ray teaches Farhaz to play saxophone.
However, Ray, an angry, traumatised veteran finally hits rock bottom. He is forced to confront his past. Anger and the memories associated with an overpowering guilt, hit at him again and again. Struggling to cope with his rage, now aware that he has been used and discarded by his country, he focuses on the way that today’s military personnel are mistreated and mismanaged.

Fifteen-year-old Farhaz, excluded from school, is isolated from his cultural roots and the Pakistani community. When not playing sax he spends most of his daytime with Danni, a girl who lives at the nearby Children's Home. They have a desperate need for each other's company, but neither is able to talk about this. Their main 'kick' is the excitement they get from shoplifting. Following a childish confrontation they temporarily split, a move both regret. Then Farhaz is recruited by a local fundamentalist group as a potential candidate for radicalisation. This new allegiance has dangerous implications for Farhaz and Danni.

 

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femmefranglaise wrote 1 day ago

I was brought up in Iran. just on the Shatt al Arab. Left when the sh....

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Hi Chris, are/were you in the military or just an interested civilian....

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Hi Chris I've had a look at your book and can't tell you how much ....

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I wrote 8 days ago

BHCG. Revolution Earth. By Lambert Nagle. 17/05/2012. For me, the technical aspects of the writing plus the opening chapter led me to reach chapter 2 without any comments; which is unusual. So I started again. I enjoyed the enforced slow reading pace, easy and interrupted. Good background k... view book

I wrote 11 days ago

BHCG Feedback. The Made-Up Man. Elizabeth Buhmann. 14/05/2012 Hi Elizabeth, Please find feedback on first three Chapters. I have quickly scanned through earlier comments and note the many positive aspects of these. Also that you have been awarded a first prize – congratulations. That takes... view book

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BHCG Feedback. White Noise by Melissa Simonson. 25/04/2012 Hi Melissa, I wrote this feedback then read some of the earlier comments offered by readers. You may find my comments completely inappropriate; they don't match too well with others. This is not really my kind of read (seems to be a... view book

I wrote 36 days ago

'Nice' is an ambiguous word. 'Very' is redundant. 'Are' wrong tense. 'Charachters'-check dictionary. I don't do ratings. view book

I wrote 36 days ago

[19/04/12 Hi Kate, Thanks for your excellent feedback. This is a good example of valuable feedback that we are all searching for. Extra thanks for devoting 'jump back time' which gave you a difficult read. I am attempting to write in my own style, something different than mainstream writing. H... view book

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