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I was brought up in a household of women, taught Classics to teenage girls, have a daughter myself and had many female colleagues - experiences which sowed the seeds of the empathy and understanding that I hope are apparent in my novel. I've finished the story, but have only uploaded a selection of chapters as editing (and reducing) continues. If you wonder about the 'gay' tag, any early hints are realised later - and that's where my protagonists, Julia and Carole, led me!

Beyond the first 6 chapters, I've uploaded 4 chapters from later parts of the novel - hoping that readers will comment on style, pace and emotional intensity.

favourite books

The Plot against America by Philip Roth
Joy in the Morning by P G Wodehouse
Annales by P Cornelius Tacitus
Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen
The way we live now by Anthony Trollope
Some books by Margaret Atwood and most things by J K Galbraith

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Where Truth Lies

Tacitus

Julia's marriage is failing. Her stepdaughter's return poses a fresh threat. How can she drive the girl away? Does she really want to?


It is 1976. A young girl, Carole, embarks on a journey of self-discovery and fulfilment. The plot shifts between middle England and northern France, Paris, London and Scotland, as she searches for the love she was denied in her bleak adolescence. She begins with her father, but her stepmother sees her as a threat to her failing marriage and the two women fight ferociously over a man who is essentially worthless.

In a world of deception and infidelity, the friendship of another woman appears to answer her needs, but a cruel combination of fate and misunderstanding snatches her happiness away. Will she find what she is seeking with a bewitching 'dark stranger' or with a married lover, the one too dangerous, the other unwilling to court danger for her sake? Does she know what she is really looking for? In a harrowing climax, she discovers that love is found in unexpected places and that she has held it in her hands from the beginning.

The title reflects the web of misunderstandings that constitutes most of our lives and the unforeseen consequences of our frequently flawed grasp of reality.

 

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I wrote 735 days ago

Well, I am sorry but I just had to back this book at the end of chapter 1. it is beautifully written and the end of the chapter came as a surprise even though I had read the pitch. I can see why your children couldn't settle to sleep after your story telling - far too much to think about and talk ... view book

I wrote 735 days ago

You've conveyed the tense atmosphere in chapter one very effectively as a starter and your character Paul is well developed as a character and a boy that one can empathise with at this awful time in history. it's an interesting period for a setting and I think your plot develops well in the early c... view book

I wrote 736 days ago

Good pitch and snappy delivery. Backed to potential but I would take a good look at your opening paragraph which is longer than the rest and has a few grammatical errors that should be ironed out - for the opener, that is. John / Tacitus view book

I wrote 736 days ago

This is great fun to read and the characters are well drawn and the dialogue really fits the style of your story. Backed with pleasure. Good luck with this. John / Tacitus view book

I wrote 739 days ago

I started to read because of your short pitch reference to WW2 (it enters as a theme in my novel and I grew up before and after the war) and because like your cover. I am glad I started it as the lyricism is both intriguing and comfortable to read (it lilts like a lot of Irish writing so I was surp... view book

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