Early morning clarity and sparkle to your prose which I admired more and more as I read on. You've created your world with vibrant knowledge which gives all the descriptions a pulse, a distinctive ripple of colour. Fabulous characterisation too. Stella's concerns quickly became mine. There were many... view book

The atmosphere of Sigma is a fascinating juxtaposition of the primeval and the digital. The virtual world is where all the excitement and fate is to be found; the physical world by contrast seems a kind of shanty town of coarse imprecations and humdrum transitions. In other words, it’s a fabulous co... view book

Fabulous writing with a constant compelling crackle of verve and vitality to it. It's both menacing and tender, cynical and wide eyed. Especially loved the devil in my wheelchair chapter. Great. I loved this. view book

I like edie feeling like a cat in a basket. That's a great metaphor for the helplessness that war brings with it and though her complaint against the deprivations is still little more than an aesthetic irritation we get the feeling of ripples beginning that will alter her deep down in her nature. Ed... view book

The hallmark of all good writing is an effortless quality, like a moving current. And yours certainly has that. There's always an imaginative vitality about your word choices, a little thrill of recognition that you've nailed the image. Never a lazy sentence and the eloquence always achieved with ad... view book