wow. What tremendous poetry is in your words. I was truly mesmerized by the flow and the imagery. Personally, I love stream of consciousness, if it's done right(I know many people don't). This is definitely done right. What's amazing is that even though there isn't necessarily any linearity to ... view book

Hi Adam! I enjoyed your first chapter, and I'm going to continue to read. That's already an accomplishment, believe me :) I liked the hook line at the end of the chapter, and after the rather formulaic action in the church, it made me want to keep going. A few small nitpicks, but keep in mind ... view book

Hi Quenntis, You suggested I be honest, and I will. But of course anything I say is purely personal opinion from a fellow writer, so take it as such. Ok, so I'm not regularly a horror reader. But that doesn't mean I won't read something in that genre that's well written and compelling, like... view book

I've read the first chapters, and I am really interested. I think you've engaged the reader's interest perfectly. I love the "Bourne Identity in a fantastic setting" idea. It's tricky to have a nameless and memoryless hero because it's easy to lose interest in someone you can't relate to. But you... view book

"an eternal moment" - did you know you were quoting Shakespeare :) It's from King John, one of the great insults of all time - "Go to hell, for an eternal moment or so". Anyway, sorry for the random comment, now back to reading chapter 1 :) view book