Ok, so this isn’t really the right flavour of erotica for me, so I’m not necessarily the target audience – take everything that follows with a pinch of salt! I don’t think The Dog Walker’s Guide is comparable to 50 Shades – for me they are very different genres. 50 Shades is erotic romance. Yes, ... view book

Brilliant stuff. Did you re-write some of this? If not, it reads much better the second time around, lol. I read (or re-read) from chapter 6 onwards – everything seems tighter and more relevant although I was reading slower too, which might have helped! The overall story seems clearer, but not at th... view book

Sorry about the delay in commenting on your latest chapters – crazy busy at the moment and not much chance to read properly. In brief - I am enjoying it still, I particularly like the language and voice you use, but I’m not sure what the significance of some of some of the plot is, ie things happen... view book

I liked chapter 5! Especially the threat to break him (good hook), and the fact that I don't actually know where this is going. Please write quicker ;) view book

This is one of the best books I've read on here in a long time :) x view book