Nicely deranged, which is the point in horror. I was very busy reading it. Nicely paced and starts off quick. This certainly deserves its high rating. I recommend it. Back mine, if you get a chance, Satan's Daughter Goes to Pittsburgh. I'm backing this, for sure. view book

Nice start on this with some pretty nasty boys. Puts the kid in a bit of a fix, given the odd hospitality of these folks. I like it. I'm backing it. Give a look at Satan's Daughter Goes to Pittsburgh, if you like. Gary view book

Excellent premise, and I always enjoy sci-fi that puts the characters first. Sci-fi should be normal to those interacting. And, of course, a bloodsucker should go to the normal, neighborhood bar for a drink too. Why change the normal progression of civilized society? After all, we don't go to th... view book

I think that if we had some time together in my writer's group, I'd be able to steer you into a slightly different direction, but that's true with almost anyone. The core of story emerges from this, and I think your style serves your intent. This is physics for those interested upon a truly unique... view book

A very poetic writing style. I comment this effort. If one is going to resort to nearly pure narrative, it should definitely have focus and song. This does. view book