Areeq Hi! First, I have to say that this is an interesting idea for a story...it kind of reminds me of the matrix, but a bit more fun:) When I first started reading, I was a bit put off by the large groups of words rather than having evenly spaced paragraphs, but after getting through the fir... view book

Wow. Thats all I can say. Wow. Excellent story, great characterisation , breathtaking, heartbreaking, touching, emotion filled great plot!!!! You write so well, this is one of the most engrossing stories I have read on here, it's filled with such deep emotion that on numerous occasions I found mys... view book

Hi! Just finished all the chapters posted and what a roller coaster read it is! Your characters are well thought out and formed, all brave in different ways, yet none without their flaws, whether it be afraid to ask for help when they are sick and are grieving, and are unable to admit it and ask... view book

Brilliant, spine tingling, horrifically frightening book! I agree wholeheartedly with Jim, this is like one of Stephen Kings earlier novels, tension filled, terrifying and ultimately brilliant, I am completely freaked out right now, this is not a book for night time reading.. Ch 1: Every legend ... view book

Why is this not published? Why has an editor not snatched this up? Honestly, this is one of the greatest books I have ever read!!!!!!!! There so much action, and emotion, the characters are brilliant and so diverse (I am personally in love with Cinuin and gregory :)), the plot is brilliant and cap... view book