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I've been writing short stories, essays, poetry, music and whatever else you can think of since I first was able to hold a pencil.
This is my first novel and I find that, while in some ways it's difficult the freedom to s-t-r-e-t-c-h into detailed descriptions and full character development is a blast. Hope you enjoy what you read and want to read more!
I also want to warn you that I don't automatically return reads. It depends on time constraints mostly. But whatever you do, please do NOT assume I will read yours if you read mine.
Please understand that wizards, werewolves, vampires, magic, magick, fantasy, sci-fi and romances bore me silly and probably will not get read by me.
If you're an agent or publisher and would like to talk with me, you can reach me at: wordworker@journalist.com

favourite books

James Patterson's Alex Cross books
Mary Higgins Clark
"Seasons Under Heaven" by LaHaye and Blackstone
"Come Before Winter" by Chuck Swindoll
and (how eclectic!) most of Dean Koontz although his serials (Frankenstein and Odd Thomas) wear thin after the first two.

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Slave to Grace

Joyce Fox

The chains of slavery weigh heavily and Onesimus wants nothing more than his freedom, but freedom comes in unexpected ways.


Sold into slavery to pay for his father's foolishly wasteful spending,Onesimus finds life as a slave especially hard. His memories of his own treatment of slaves compare badly to the treatment he receives at the hands of his Christian master,Philemon. But when he is falsely accused of theft and cannot prove his innocence,he can't believe his punishment will be any less than what he would have meted out in his own household. Filled with fear, he steals a purse of money and runs away, planning to leave Greece and lose himself in the crowded streets of Rome.
On the way, he hears stories of Paul, who survived the bite of an adder but insists he is only a man, not a god.
When Onesimus finally meets Paul, he finds himself attracted not only to the man, but to the God he serves. After studying with Paul a while,Onesimus goes back to Philemon to "make his paths straight." Adventures and miracles along the way abound.Will Philemon accept him back or sell him? Will his fellow-slaves welcome him? What of the "girl he left behind?" Is there happiness in store for Onesimus or will sorrow be his lot?

 

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AudreyB wrote 1 day ago

Can you help? http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/98436/sevent....

Dr. J wrote 1 day ago

You are most welcomed, Joyce - and, thank you again, for giving me a ....

Dr. J wrote 1 day ago

Dearheart: I've just completed a very sincere review of your book. ....

Dr. J wrote 1 day ago

Joyce: oh my dear, I didn't know...here's a prayer for open doors and....

Dr. J wrote 1 day ago

thanks forthe reminder, Joyce: I'll get right backtoit! Pat

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I wrote 1 day ago

Intro., Para 3: "...Later, I choose ..." typo ... chose. Step one, Para starting: "Ashley grew up believing what he parents told ..." "he" needs to be "her" view book

I wrote 1 day ago

Egon ~ The proofreader in me insists I tell you that, except for a few "hard returns" where hyphens appear in the middle of sentences I have found no punctuation, spelling or grammatical errors. As for the rest, I'm amazed at the amount of cultural information imparted through the characters of you... view book

I wrote 9 days ago

Ch. 34 para starting, "He misses you too ..." you have the phrase "her stomach was literally turning around in her stomach" ... besides the repetition, it just isn't clear. Maybe: "Her stomach was doing flip flops" or "Her stomach was turning around nauseatingly." view book

I wrote 9 days ago

Man alive! Here I am ... at work ... waiting for the "next wave" of business, reading Miah's goodbyes ... fighting tears ... and here comes the next business! How embarrassing! Excellent work, my friend. Excellent! Joyce view book

I wrote 10 days ago

Ch. 32 para starting, "Although it had been about nine weeks ..." you write: "...an odyssey thats purpose ..." In common speech "thats" is used as you use it here, but it isn't a proper word anymore than "ain't" is (does that make sense?) lol Maybe try something like: "...an odyssey, the purpose ... view book

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