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Natasha Vloyski

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I am a retired psychologist, living in the country with my husband, two dogs, a cat and a horse; plus dozens of wild turkeys and deer.
Riding the Rails is complete, however only a third has been uploaded.

Sorry folks but I don't read any book about serial killers, child abuse or sexual sadism. Gotta draw the line somewhere.

P.S. Natasha Vloyski is the penname I use in case you are confused about why I have two names.

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The Sweetness at the Bottom of the Pie
The Name of the Rose

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Riding the Rails

Susan Crabtree

Charlie Buchanan runs away and hops a train out of town. It's 1932 and he's destined to meet the man who will change his life.


Riding the Rails is a gritty historical-mystery fiction set in the Depression-era. Two hundred and fifty thousand children left home in the 1930's to jump on freight trains, to see the country and look for work, never fully understanding what life would be like riding the rails. Charlie Buchanan is one of these children who runs away from home and from a financially ruined and disparaging father.


Charlie becomes a tried and true hobo of only nine years of age and finds that hopping freights is a rather dangerous proposition. He learns life’s lessons on his journey, facing gangs of youth who prey on travelers, old men called ‘wolves’, railroad bulls ready to beat and maim illegal rail passengers and learns that he’s not alone; he is among many who seek their fortune in a country ‘that is dying by inches’.

He meets Moses Pulani, called by his hobo name, ‘Gypsy’, an outcast even among the hoboes and tramps. Moses has escaped to America to hide among the migrating homeless. After Moses is thrown in jail for murder, Henry Bledsoe, a local reporter, singles Charlie out to ‘get the story’ and unwraps a mystery that surrounds the man.

 

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Hi Susan, Thanks so much for your long-term support of The Morning D....

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hi Susan Given what's on your shelf I thought my book might fit you....

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Natasha...please meet 'Madeline' David

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I wrote 68 days ago

Ch 1 Excellent, captivating beginning. The essence of a new immagrant's experience is here, smoothly written. backed. view book

I wrote 110 days ago

Ch 4 This could be an excellent chapter if it werte pared down. There is extraneous information that slows down the action and the suspense, and intrigue. We, as readers, get 'it'. Repeating certain elements about the patient records does not make us get it any better. view book

I wrote 110 days ago

Ch 3 The concepts and development of tje story line is enigmatic. However, I have to say I think the dialogue still needs work. It doesn't sound true and real. Just my opinion..... view book

I wrote 110 days ago

Ch 2 Rather stilted, Chloe dodesn't seerm empathetic and the conversation is unusal. Definitely, no 'getting to kmow you' conversation' which doesn't lend itself to having a patient gain any trust in the 'caregiver'. SO I would say although the chapter is well-written it seems to have some issues. view book

I wrote 110 days ago

CH 1 INteresting first chapter that sucks the reader in immediately. A little disjointed, going from the accident to the woman already in the wheelchair but I imagine that back story will come later. Also the mystery theme begins early and helps move the story forward. Enjoyable read. view book

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