Hey BJ. Really enjoyed the opening chapter. I felt like i was in the courtroom. Fluid writing, quick pace, and i dare say Hale will develop into one hell of a character. Great pitch too, although i have to say i'm not bowled over by the cover. For a story about a man who communicates with ghosts, i ... view book

Hey Frank. Love your writing. Only read the first three and i already know i'm shelving this. You know, it's writing like this that makes me wonder how any of us hope to be published if the likes of your calibre are still struggling. It's so frustrating because you can't help thinking: What the hell... view book

Hey Lynn, I've just read chapters 1 and 8. Obviously a bit difficult to follow a plot line reading a couple of dismembered chapters but quite often it's difficult to judge work from the first or second chapters alone. Many authors have great openers and then the writing suffers further along. Not h... view book

Hi Jose. I have to say, i think your writing style is fantastic. Certain lines are beautifully executed, such as "I taste it as fully as if i were dining on my own self," and you can't help almost tasting the blood yourself. Your prose is clever and your pace is good. That aside, i have to confess... view book

This is some pretty original stuff, David. Your writing is fluid, carrying with it something of a screenplay feel, or simply a play. Enjoyed the first chapter. Lee view book