Hey Karen, I've read the first couple of chapters of your novel and love it so far! I can see kid fans of Harry Potter and Neil Gaiman gobbling up this book. You start off fast with a bang! You give us a mystery and real fleshed out characters. I love the idea of grant wishers and shadow people. ... view book

Hi Margaret, I've read your first two chapters and so far love the story! The characters pop out of the pages and grabbed my attention straight away. Love the scene with Munro and his horse, not many people show that relationships in their stories. Horses always get hurt, rarely have personality.... view book

Hi Alan, Read the first chapters. Great start! I love the action in the first chapter. The second chapter really takes you into the characters heads. I like how you sprinkle in all the doubts and thoughts about what's going on in their relationship. I'll admit, I thought he was cheating right awa... view book

Cute start! Very funny. You have the dialogue down perfectly for a bunch of rowdy guys. You handle both the present tense and first person pov very well. A few puncuations problems, but that's easily fixed. Lots of pop culture references, like real people talk about! Great job. I look forward to... view book

I love the set up so far. You have a knack for setting the scenery. Your dialogue is great too, seems like a very strong aspect to the story. I'm looking forward to reading more! view book