Thanks Neville, I appreciate the editing tips. We're too often too close to our own work to pick things up. Ken view book

I can tell whether someone can write within half a paragraph, ability to weave a credible plot may take a bit longer to determine. Inability however, is obvious much sooner. You can write and your plot is great. The only criticism I can level at you is your choice of the label of "terrorist" for San... view book

I like your writing style. I enjoy books, regardless of genre, where the writing flows along easily. It's what I try to do when I write. I'm backing Absence Fallacy because I'm drawn along wanting to read more. I'll read further as time permits. view book

I really like what I've read so far and as soon as time permits I'll read further. You create very good word pictures without descending into too much detail and I'm keen to see where the story goes. Backed with pleasure view book

As one South African to another, have a look at The Brass bring Down please. view book