Great appeal for children, especially for boys. The characters seem inviting and the first 2 chapters certainly raise the anticipation of a great adventure to come. There seems to be quite a lot of dialogue early on and I wonder if intermixing a bit more background on the elf would provide some insi... view book

Hi. Your book has been on my shelf for a couple of days. I will continue to read and comment later. I would appreciate if you would take a look at my book, "The Feydom of Sencal". view book

David, Just read the first 2 chapters. Between the dream and the mystery of Grayrigg, the reader has no other choice but to continue reading. Best of luck. view book

Just read your first 2 chapters. What can I say that hasn't already been said. Great characters, you provide enough bait to draw a reader in but don't give the story away and good flow. I will back. Would appreciate if you took a look at my book, "The Feydom of Sencal". Best of luck. view book

Hi Just read your first 2 chapters. What can I say that hasn't been said before in the comments below. Great characters, first chapters provide enough bait to draw you end and excellent flow. I will back. Would appreciate if you took a look at my book, "The Feydom of Sencal". view book