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I'm a teacher, a reader, and a writer. I love all three. My 7th and 8th grade students are a constant source of inspiration, and also my biggest critics (probably because I'm theirs as well!).

I'm into a lot of other things that I won't force you to read through. If you want to chat, just message me! :D

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Edited chapters 1-4 so far, and still going! Thanks for all the helpful comments! :D

Soothsayer is not complete yet, but I'm working on it. It's roughly edited, so any critiques would be helpful! Thanks so much!

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Soothsayer

A. Greshock

To the world, Lady Santabella is a wise, old soothsayer performing at the acclaimed Cirque de Lune. But then again, appearances can be deceiving.


Arianna Santabella lies for a living. As a soothsayer, she makes up stories to satisfy her customers, and as a performer, she knows that no one would ever take her seriously if they realized she was actually a sixteen-year-old girl.

Life is going pretty well for Ari despite the fact that she can't remember the first eight years of it. She's the most successful act at Cirque de Lune; her boss is more like a mother; and the boy she likes actually likes her back. Never mind the constant nightmares and shameless guilt that her lying brings her. With winter break only one day away, Ari knows that she can unwind and come up with new ways to convince herself that what she's doing is for the best.

But soon everything changes when a strange boy wearing a top hat comes to visit her tent, and not only knows her true identity, but takes her away from the only life she's ever known. Soon, Ari is plunged in an underground world where everyone has a secret to keep, and where she might just find out more about herself than she ever thought possible.

 

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I wrote 138 days ago

YARG review! I'm here to restore your faith! (That was my attempt at a dramatic entrance, but it's not quite the same over the computer.) To be totally honest, what drew me into this story was something I read before I even started on your pitch or story. It was your tag words. They are as f... view book

I wrote 139 days ago

Christine, Erica is definitely someone who the YA audience will relate to. Being stuck in the same place and bored because of it is something that I think every teen goes through, and having been raised in a small town myself, I know what it feels like to want to get out and fast (strangely enou... view book

I wrote 139 days ago

YARG Review! Heck yes! I girl who kicks butt! What YA (and adult) wouldn't love this story?! Miss Justice is a great character and despite being a teenage superhero, you really give a real feel to her through your writing, which I think will help readers relate to her more. What I think is great ... view book

I wrote 139 days ago

YARG Review! I just want to start off by saying that recently in my seventh grade class, we read a book called The Outsiders, which is realistic fiction. Afterwards, my students were asking me if I could recommend any other realistic fiction books to them on account that they enjoyed The Outsider... view book

I wrote 146 days ago

YARG review! Karen, You write like someone who's been practicing her art. This is really well done and well developed! I have to say that you have a very interesting narration going on here. I like it. It brings an almost suspenseful and ominous feeling - especially when you focus on Ayden. Th... view book

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