Essentially an intriguing concept and I'm backing it primarily for its originality. I had a similar idea myself (but based on a different concept that included a high proportion of illustration) Very good luck and thanks for the enjoyment. view book

For starters I've only read the first three chapters, but immediately one recognises well written work. It's a very good premise for a book, and even early on promises to deliver. You, like me I feel, are working to control the perspective with regard the the past being intrincically linked to the p... view book

Marc, I like this. I know the area well, I was on the beach at Llantwit Major just the other week. Anyway, I think you have the rudiments of a really good style here, bit Jack Kerouac. Sure, like many of us, you need to do a thorough edit and probably do some minor surgery. (I feel the way you intr... view book

Pierre, apologies for the huge delay. The Little Girl in the Fig Tree has been on my mind, but I'm here now. Firstly, let me tell you I have only read the first three chapters. It is charming and slightly disturbing at the same time, and I intend that as a compliment. Also, I quite like your punch... view book

A grabbing opening paragraph that sticks in the mind. Funny, whimsical with some delightful turns of phrase. This is an easy, enjoyable read Patrick which deserves, and am sure, will do even better than it already is. I'm still chortling. view book