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I am a stickler for content. I insist the book should have some.

Was here in 2010, loved all the nice things people say, loved the criticism more. No matter how small, most is constructive and I try to offer the same. In the big world out there those 'nitpicks' are already standing me in good stead.

I venture my humble opinion when I think the writer might like some input and when I can find the time. My book is infinitely better as a result of some (much needed) "harsh" words. Thank you all for that.

I have used some - most I think - of the criticism I have received. Some I ignore. It is always a judgement call. I am grateful when people find the time to comment, and I try to return the favour as and when time permits.

My abiding opinion is - It is, as they say, all good.

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We need to talk about Kevin\
Cutting the Stone
The Help
The Hunger Games
Bonfire of the Vanities
Roots
Prince of Tides
Angela's Ashes
Any Tom Sharpe novel
The Ship Killers
Pride and Prejudice
Sophie's Choice.

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FOUR BETTER FOUR WORSE

Jennifer Ward

Some things have a seductive shine. Fame. Happy families. Murder... and the veneer becomes cellophane.
There's simply no protection from oneself.


A saga about the McAllister family. Case and Laine McAllister, the fairy tale. They appear to be the perfect family. And, almost nauseatingly, they are.

Carla Sanseri‘s marriage has reached its sell-by date. One sunny spring morning, Case 'rescues' Carla when she breaks down along the side of the road. Bonnie Tyler sang about it first. For Carla, it is love at first sight. Carla discovers she can "set asunder" with the worst of them.

Case’s best friend is Jude Daniels, married to the reserved and stylish Ashley. They have all the trappings... Case turns to his friend for help and accidentally stumbles upon Jude's secret life.

Next door to the McAllisters live Krissie and Rudolf Rokovljavic. A wife in servitude. Waiting for freedom can be murder. Things are disintegrating fast, insanity is finding a home behind trusted eyes, and no one's noticing. Tragedies always happen to ‘other people.’ The myth.

The warning signs are always ignored.

The truth.

(And no, you don't guess correctly what's going to happen. No one has, yet.)

 

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I wrote 91 days ago

This is not my taste but backed it because good writing is good writing. You are a good writer and I am sure you could do well with this. All the best. view book

I wrote 91 days ago

I thought the intro-idea was clever but too long. Once 'reality' prevailed, I could feel the characters, set up rather well by slick dialogue. I liked it, and I usually can't get behind books written in the first person. Interesting thing: Read this morning that the word "said" comes from the charac... view book

I wrote 91 days ago

Easy absorbing read. Backed with pleasure. view book

I wrote 91 days ago

Read up chapter 4 and if it wasn't for this wretched laptop, I would read more. I was engaged from the beginning and the writing is so heartfelt I am sure many many people will relate. All the best. view book

I wrote 91 days ago

Dismal grammatically. Excellent and popular premise. Easy flow to your writing, and you obviously enjoy it. Which means you need to dig deeper, raise your own bar, as it were. I understand there is something called a 25 line test and I believe as it is, it would fail. The beginning is a cliche and w... view book

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