Thanks, Tracee. I did finish it, but it was my first novel and it needs a lot of work. I will revisit it at some stage and do a rather major editing job on it! view book

Thanks very much, Ruby. Having revisited it after writing my second novel, I think this one needs quite a lot of work (I'm happy with the writing, but it needs much more in the way of parallel strands) so will be revisiting it after I've completed the edits on novel 2. view book

Although classified as literary fiction, it very much strikes me as Fantasy, which, even in satire form, is not a genre I relate to. I'm thus dubious about my ability to provide meaningful feedback. However, for what it's worth, here are a few initial thoughts … "Fingers of light" immediately str... view book

Thank you all very much for the kind comments, and to Blueboy and Jaye in particular for the very valuable feedback on the dialogue. Jaye, you correctly picked up on the dilemma here: it is where a lot of the humour lays, so it's a tricky one balancing out comic effect and realism. I'm new to the... view book