Chapter two: Now I'm really getting into the characters, the sassy heroin Ariana and the odious Duncan Frayne. I hope in future that Martha gets to make use of her rolling pin. I loved the use of humour and conflict in this chapter. I'll be back for more! Laurelle One of the WAGS view book

It has been a pleasure to read such enticing narrative - this is my kind of book! Everything about this story is memorable, from the heartbreaking opening, to the stand-out names of the characters. As a reader I feel like I am standing beside Ariana and urging her to succeed. I will be back to read ... view book

This is beautifully written and carefully crafted. My guess is that you took a lot of time to perfect this work. Backed with well wishes Laurelle One of the WAGS view book

I like it when a writer gets straight to the point. The writing is perfect for the genre and for audiences both young and old. The sentences are short, which leads to an abrupt, uneasy feeling that is well suited to the theme of your story. Backed with well wishes Laurelle One of the WAGS view book

You've had an interesting history of working in public service : ) If you can make it in Hackney, you can make it anywhere. I like the expression 'Muscular Christianity' and also the sentiment expressed about the Krays. There's a mixture of sweet nostalia with a feeling that there's something dark l... view book