BLIND FATE Hello Danielle, Here is my return comment over your book. I don’t go over grammar, unless I see something that really jumps out at me. I think there are others on Autho that are better at grammar advice than I am. So, my comments are mainly as a reader and my thoughts as I move thr... view book

YARG REVIEW- MY BEAUTIFUL STALKER Hello Di, Here is my return YARG review. As I tell everyone take what rings true and pitch the rest. Only you know what will work best with the story. I don’t comment on grammar because I think others on Autho and in the YARG group are better at that than me.... view book

THE SHOUT OF THE PHOENIX I love the story of the phoenix in the beginning. So your book caught my eye. I love your opening. In general it works well, but I think a great hook would be to end on the note where you say, “Like I did...” This really compelled me to read on and for some reason the re... view book

NIGHT-SHADE Hello Laura, I just read through your first chapter. I also glanced at some of the comments. I know that a few of the mechanical points were already pointed out. I think that it’s important to just get the story out though, then go back and work on all of that. It has a TON of pot... view book

THE ANGEL CHORD Hello Derek, Here is my portion of our first chapter read swap. You’ll notice I don’t comment over grammar, I think others on Autho are better at that than me. I comment mainly as a reader. That being said, pitch anything that you know doesn’t work the story. I liked the line ... view book