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Brian Howell

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I have been writing fiction since the nineties, have had several short stories published in magazines and e-zines, a novel published by The Toby Press, and a collection of short stories by Elastic Press. I have been working on my new novel, a work of historical fiction, for a long time, and now that it is finished I want to get as many reactions as possible. I am experienced at critiquing from other sites, but I am a very SLOW reader, even with paper, so, like anyone, whatever I read in full will have to be something special to hold me. But I guess that that goes for everyone. IMPORTANT: having been on the site for a while now, one thing I have noticed is that many people exaggerate their positive reactions to a lot of quite mediocre writing. I have seen comments to the effect that such-and-such a novel is one of the greatest works of fiction that the reader has read since Joyce, or something like that. I think that's a bit irresponsible. Maybe something like 'This reminds of (parts of) [insert famous writer] ...'. Just be a bit more subtle. In a way, the generally positive note is a good thing, but I also think that it gets people's hopes up too much. This has nothing to do with genre snobbishness, purely the quality of the writing and ideas. I find it hard to be very critical (I actually hate being negative and would probably not make a good agent or editor), but, equally I cannot get excited very much about writing that isn't promising. I still consider I have a lot to learn, of course, and over the years those who have been most helpful have often been the ones who have improved my writing.

favourite books

Yukio Mishima: Death in Midsummer
Yukio Mishima: The Sea of Fertility (tetralogy)
Derek Marlowe: Echoes of Celandine
Ian McEwan: The Child in Time
Vladimir Nabokov: The Gift
Vladimir Nabokov: Lolita
John Banville: Dr Copernicus
Marguerite Yourcenar: The Abyss (L'oeuvre au noir)
William Gaddis: The Recognitions
Mary Gaitskill: Because They Wanted To
Junichiro Tanizaki: The Secret History of the Lord of Musashino (novella) & Seven Japanese Tales
Andre Dubus: The Novellas of Andre Dubus
Andre Dubus: Collected Stories
Peter Carey: The Fat Man in History/Exotic Pleasures/Collected Stories
Ian McEwan: In Between The Sheets
Julia Cortazar: End of the Game
Angela Carter: The Bloody Chamber
Borges: Collected Stories
Aldous Huxley: The Devils of Loudun
Aldous Huxley: Brave New World
George Orwell: 1984

my websites

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The Stream and The Torrent: Th....

Brian Howell

The rise and fall of a scandalous painter of his time unjustly persecuted by the authorities.


1619. On the cusp of The Thirty Years War, the world-wide movement known as The Rosy Cross is approaching its goal of replacing established religion in Europe. Frederick V of the Palatinate and Elizabeth, Queen of Bohemia, are set to become the leaders of this movement, but face strong resistance from both Catholic, Protestant, and national powers.

The libertine painter Torrentius, who has become known to Frederick and Elizabeth as the inventor of a device that has military and mystical applications, finds himself pursued on both sides of the religious divide as a result of the clues he has left in one particularly mysterious painting. Are his intentions good or is he a threat to civilised society?

The story of his pursuit and persecution is told by five voices: diplomat and polymath Huygens; inventor and ‘artificer’ Cornelis Drebbel; ambassador and royal agent Dudley Carleton; Elizabeth of Bohemia; and the poet and preacher John Donne. Torrentius’s own contribution is found many years later when Huygens’s famous son, the physicist and astronomer Christiaan Huygens, brings all these accounts sections together.

 

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jlbwye wrote 8 days ago

Hello again Brian, Here’s some more stars for a book I’ve enjoyed ....

Marita A. Hansen wrote 21 days ago

Hi, Brian. With the new month comes changes in shelves, so I'm messag....

patio wrote 24 days ago

I write with greetings and invitation to read a chapter or more of my....

Alderley Edge wrote 35 days ago

Hi, Brian, I would like to take this opportunity to draw your attenti....

fictionguy wrote 59 days ago

How about doing a read and comment swap?

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I wrote 89 days ago

Hi, Maeve. Thanks so much for the invaluable comments. I just hope that you can keep on reading. I do see the point about the slow beginning. And it's true that the distance that T is held at is part of the mystery. Brian. view book

I wrote 92 days ago

Hi Harriet Thanks so much for giving this your time. I think all your points are perceptive and relevant. I don't really know how to reply to the basic problem a lot of readers have with not being able to engage with it. I am not attracted at all to page-turners as such and I am pretty useless at... view book

I wrote 93 days ago

Hi Andy Thanks very much. I'll try to look at yours but there's a backlogue. Best Brian view book

I wrote 96 days ago

Thanks, J.S. I'd only say to a couple of your points, I sort of agree about the clichéd aspect of found documents and in fact the son finding them was a bit of an afterthought which I am seriously thinking of jettisoning, but whether I can do that given the final chapter and voice, I'm not so sure L... view book

I wrote 97 days ago

Hi, Victoria. Thanks for the good, practical suggestions. I really hope you can stick with it for the week, but I understand about being busy. The long sentences is a very vexed question, but I am obviously at some stage going to have to simplify some of them without losing the style and ambience. T... view book

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