I too have written a book on this very subject but I wrote it for my children and have never shared it with another soul (except my sister who cried her eyes out). I was married to an abusive man in the temple too, he used dogma and twisted the doctrine to meet his own abusive needs.... BUT I ha... view book

one can't help but wonder why there is a chicken in the uber-clean pharma halls. I love how you descrive the portly woman who is wearg clothing a little too tight for her size (it is a pet peeve of mine when women who are robust wear clothes clearly made for juniors, So it made me smile to read this... view book

I first clicked onto your book to critique its cover but your pitch has me adding this to my watchlist. Look like a very interesting read! The cover i LIKE! Beautiful hair, glowing eyes- it certainly makes me look and wonder. It acheives its purpose and made me want to "pick it up" view book

This is a cover critique, and NOT on content. (book covers sell books) The woman in the picture is beautiful and depicts elegance and innocence... with a secret. Hiding behind a tree gives the viewer a sense of "hard to get" and the branch draws the eye down to the author's name, which is good. A ... view book

I'm offering a critique on cover art, not content ;) First off, the yellow is brilliant. With so many covers in blacks and darker colors, the yellow will certainly grab attention on the shelf. Also, the color psychology behing yellow says, "Up-beat, positive, smile!" Seeing how this is in the com... view book