So far, this is charming, stylish and funny. Also easy to read. Thanks, Bec. (Find Mark). view book

Good descriptions here. I did find that there was a lot of back story in this first chapter, I am not sure that this is such a good thing. I have been told - when I first posted my work up here - that I should leave out the back story till later. Over all good stuff. Bec (Find Mark) view book

Thank you for introducing me to your novel. I love this first chapter. It grabbed me from the go and maintained suspense throughout. Very chilling and I was engrossed. The only point I would like to make is on the very last paragraph, it's just personal taste, but I would prefer it not to be there, ... view book

This was a pleasure to read. It was quirky, poignant, and I enjoyed the style. The 'fork' was amusing and the train wreak reaction to finding out Beth pregnant, brilliant. I must admit I found the 2nd chapter easier to read than the 1st. Thanks, Bec (Find Mark) view book

Hi Scott, What a rich tapestry you have created. The premise made me go, 'wow, can't wait to read'. I loved your ideas and characters, they conjured some lovely images. My only crit are the descriptions, that are great but can sometime suffocate the action of the scene, in my opinion. I have ... view book