Susie -- I have backed your book because it is so different from so many others on this site. It needs some editing doint to it, as you probably know already -- a careful go-through would sort out most things. At times the narrative does jump from one point to another: some one-sentence links might ... view book

Dear KC -- This book deserves to go on climbing -- it is very well written, with lots of good detail which must have required voluminous research and it has good characterisations and an intriguing plot -- a bit Hollywoodish, but still quite plausible and one the ladies will love -- two chaps fighti... view book

Dan – Though you have only uploaded four chapters, the writing is slick, polished and detailed and I have to say I can’t fault it, which means that it did not jar at all as I read it, which is a good thing as it means you forget about the style and just get on with reading the action. The topic is b... view book

Hullo Richard – I read straight through to Chapter Eight without stopping and had some good chuckles on the way. You have a very witty mind. Your scene setting is excellent … your description of the East Anglian coastal weather, for one ... the description of the caravan park and the caravan, for tw... view book

Dear J. D. -- Haven't read a children's book since Just William, but I think your idea is great. Backing you for the Ed's Desk even though you didn't agree with me on the book endings. I think you have more chance of making it than most of us. Can't suggest a change -- and wouldn't anyway. It's your... view book