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From now on, if you don't thank me for commenting on or backing your book, I'll assume you are rude or too full of yourself to spare a few seconds and will immediately remove your book from my shelf.

If you can't be bothered to thank people who are trying to help you succeed, than you don't deserve to.

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The King of Attolia, by Megan Whalen Turner is my all-time favorite book. I've lost count of how many times I've read it. If you haven't read it, you should. It's amazing.

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Wrong

Krista Alasti

A lonely boy with a painful past and a brother with a grudge, caught in a web of lies. Will they ever be free?


“I’ll try not to go on a killing rampage and slice your throat, then.”

Those were 16-year-old Clay Rainey's last words to his (understandably) ex girlfriend. They were also the words that got him passed off like a hand-me-down to the brother he'd spent the past ten years avoiding--with good reason: lying to someone's back is easier than lying to his face.

No one but Clay knows his mom's car 'accident' was actually a suicide--and that she'd planned for him to join her in the afterlife. But truth-telling is an option that will bring nothing but accusations (dear old dad) and pain (big brother Jason)--as Clay's self-inflicted burn scars can attest.

Now he's got his chance to start over with a new school, a new job, and possibly even a new girlfriend--one who isn't likely to scream in terror at the sight of him. But none of that matters when Jason treats him like an eater-of-babies. To win back his brother, Clay must come to terms with the one thing that scares him the most: the truth.

 

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Hi Krista! Thank you so much for your continued support of Memoria! ....

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Hi there! I would just like to thank you for the lovely comments y....

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Thanks, Krista, for your review of Graffiti Heaven. I'll have a reloo....

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I wrote 13 days ago

Wow, this is really cool. I admit your pitch drew me in, and your opening line did the same. The writing flows well, but I think the run-on sentences are a bit jarring for me, like the first line of chapter one. I'd just make it two sentences and I think it'd look better. The descriptions are well-d... view book

I wrote 13 days ago

Brilliant opening - we get a good idea of your MC's voice, some compelling imagery, and your description of the silence is eerily seductive - great sense of suspense, too. I think since it's a prologue you can get away with the cool poetic thing you've got going on. We don't really know what's happe... view book

I wrote 13 days ago

Brilliant opening - we get a good idea of your MC's voice, some compelling imagery, and your description of the silence is eerily seductive - great sense of suspense, too. I think since it's a prologue you can get away with the cool poetic thing you've got going on. We don't really know what's happe... view book

I wrote 13 days ago

Opening line is great, really captures the MC's voice. I also enjoyed the sublte way you introduce the characters, giving small details about them that say a lot, and the background you've already established brings the characters and story to life--like the way you bring in Jenna's character, and t... view book

I wrote 14 days ago

First off, your tag-line is fantastic. One of the cleverest I've seen. Your first two sentences are perfect. You immediately engender sympathy for your MC as well as create a nice sense of suspense. Dialogue is snappy and compelling, not to mention believable. I loved the little details you include,... view book

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