Heh, it simply started as a short story assignment (at college) with the vague objective of having to relate to childhood, thus Chapter 1 was born. So far, most of the remaining chapters came from future assignments. view book

:) Well, I do what I can to entertain the masses. Seriously though, I appreciate it and I'll see what I can do about getting to your story. view book

Thanks for the critique. I'll do what I can about the intro (this isn't false modesty but I admit I'm better at the story writing than the story introing but like I said, I'll do what I can). I'll also try and get around to reading your story. view book

Thanks. :) I'll get around to reading your book and commenting on it as well. view book

Read the first two chapters. Definately gripping so far. I noticed that you're writing in the present tense (keep it up) which so far gives a kind of tenseness which is effective. view book