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Thank you for taking the time to look at my bit of this crazy place. Not a lot to say about me really, Wife, Mum, Granny, trying to be a writer. Born in Yorkshire, grew up in Lancashire. Spent over twenty years in the Middle East and now spend my time between a little house in the Middle of a French Forest and a flat in the West Midlands UK. That's about it
A constantly changing parade.
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A passing glance leads to obsession in this dark story of love, loneliness and secrets.
From the very first glance nothing is as it seems. Lies and obsession lurk beneath the surface and as the relationships develop disaster seems inevitable..
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Hi Diane, Here are the typos I spotted in the chapters I read (22-....
Hi Diane, I haven't forgotten you - or your lovely book. I've been....
Thank you. It might just be a case of ' have another biscuit and get....
No you don't. it's all just a bit odd.
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Thread of Time 09/02/2012 I love your cover. Short pitch I thought was fine. Long pitch I though was a bit too rambling and involved and would serve you better with a bit of an edit. I only comment as a reader, if I spot a typo I’ll try to remember to let you know but there are people on th... view book
The hooligans of Kandahar 06/02/2012 I’ll be honest I wasn’t that keen on starting this. I have the greatest respect for what you guys are doing, I am astounded at your bravery and I wish there was no need for any of it. However, from the very first paragraph you had me hooked. Your writing st... view book
I was thrown for a minute by the repetition of chapter three, it was entertaining and well written but I am not totally convinced by the vocabulary for the time that this is set in. At times it seems a little too modern. The characters however are very well drawn and likeable. There is a nic... view book
Small Pleasures 02/02/2012 The writing seems to me to very proficient and skilful. The characters are very well drawn right from the start. The dialogue is believable, natural and the flow seems pitched just right . I look forward to seeing what sort of cover you are going to go for. Up to no... view book
I rather like the diary entry delivery of this but I think you could make more of it. I think it would be rather nice to have a bit more of the hidden thoughts otherwise it is simply a journal. I rather liked his reaction to the birth of the baby, didn't know whether to kiss him or eat him - that ... view book