Okay! Every time I read it it gets better, I will say that! There are still punctuation errors though - most apostrophes missing, and often a comma where it should be a semi-colon. In the second chapter there is a 'your' which should be a 'you're'. i've messaged you on twitter about the 'we're' ... view book

Okay! Every time I read it it gets better, I will say that! There are still punctuation errors though - most apostrophes missing, and often a comma where it should be a semi-colon. In the second chapter there is a 'your' which should be a 'you're'. i've messaged you on twitter about the 'we're' ... view book

Hi, Zerin - you have really improved this! The sentences are much tighter, it is more understandable and less of a jumble! However, two glaring errors in the 1st paragraph! It should be "out OF the window" , not "out the window". Also, you've used the word 'caused' twice. Other points; Ever... view book

I think the idea is nice, and one that would be enjoyed by young women, but I think you need to do quite a lot of re-writing - go over and over it, consider how each sentence might be better expressed. Also, I think you need to have something punchy happening in the first chapter so the reader want... view book

I like this, quite a lot. I haven't read it all proper yet, though, like. (joke...) Surely if people need basic lessons in grammar, punctuation, etc, then they are not ready to write a novel in the first place, hmm?? I reckon you can either write or you can't, and no amount of nightclasses, wr... view book