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I am a married father of three little boys. I love football, soccer, hockey, cinema, literature and am a fierce libertarian.

I am not interested in pursuing the editor's desk. I would rather have some good, honest criticism (and compliments when appropriate). I don't care if you back the book or not, but twenty word appraisals saying, "Hey, not bad!" are just not helpful. I need to know what works and what does not work.

If you suggest a read swap with me, you go first. You'll get from me commensurate with what you gave to me. If I agree to do a read swap, it will be done within a couple days of you posting your observations. I will back anyone who gives me an honest and thorough appraisal.

favourite books

Les Miserables, The Hunchback of Notre Dame, A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court, Atlas Shrugged, The Hobbit, The Fellowship of the Ring, A Confederacy of Dunces, Nostromo, Dune, 1984, Animal Farm

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The Preferred Observer

Matthew Alexander

A group of people struggle to save Mankind from a disaster of its own making.


Europe has been ravaged by a meteor, its surviving populace now scattered refugees around the globe. The power plants that draw energy from the Earth's Mantle are acting as magnets, drawing more chunks of rock each year to crash on the surface. Even worse, each meteor crash brings with it an inexplicable plague, the Falling Disease. With time running out, a handful of individuals get caught up in an effort to save Mankind. Their paths begin to cross and recross, and their actions affect others in ways they could never have foreseen. A man marooned in an unfamiliar time, an orphan girl swept up by events, an android who begins to think independently, a psychiatric patient who was once an insider, a woman who somehow survived the Falling Disease, an honorable hitman and an escort with access to sensitive secrets all have a role to play. But when they get a glimpse of the truth, it may be more than they are willing to accept...

 

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Ronald J Barber wrote 1 day ago

Hi Matthew A while ago you were kind enough to back my novel Edge ....

Scott Toney wrote 3 days ago

Matthew, I noticed that you've supported a good friend of mine's b....

ShadowOfOsiris wrote 6 days ago

Hi. Just a quick message to let you know an 'inactive' section is bei....

AuroraNemesis wrote 8 days ago

I would be very grateful if you could find the time to check my boo....

MrKarats wrote 8 days ago

Thank you very much for the support, Matthew :) I'm noting just in c....

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I wrote 76 days ago

"One thing that I did struggle with occasionally was the language within the book. As a British reader I found everything very American (descriptions, products, places)," says the HarperCollins reviewer. How dare he write an American book! "I think that with some editing to adapt certain words... view book

I wrote 87 days ago

This needs a run through the spell check, as well as some properly placed commas. tonight = that night, if we are to use the past tense. the scroungy man said/replied the pretty girl… dialogue tags like these are unnecessary. We already know whom he is addressing. Cutting these tags will make ... view book

I wrote 92 days ago

Your short pitch is fine but your long pitch, I feel, needs work. It suddenly mentions Mother, but we don’t know what or who that is and consequently don’t (yet) care about it. Other than that I thought it did the basics of a pitch, but I would consider working with that part. …reaching what seem... view book

I wrote 107 days ago

The first paragraph could work as an introduction, but I would suggest separating it somehow from the rest… and it you separate it, you almost have to make it longer, get more out of it. I would either do more with it or nothing at all. My arrival at the recreation zone made it clear why most of ... view book

I wrote 118 days ago

SF42 Review There is a gripping event lurking in that prologue, waiting to shine, but a few things need to be brushed away first. There are a lot of unnecessary modifiers, words like “unimaginably” that are instructing readers on what to think as well as clogging up the sentences. I would counsel... view book

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