a very well deplicted story so far i'll put it on my watch list and once it gets to a more finial stage if you hold the excitement and the base of the story like you have thus far ill back your book very nice job THE BEAST view book

a very well written book i really enjoyed the story and it has all you could ask for in a great story well developed plot and nice discriptive story lines very easy to fall into the story as the lead and follow it along i would like to read more of you story's and more of this book as it develo... view book

i found your book very intertaining and most of it realistic a very good read some small differences from the normal viking tales of pillage /rape /and plunder for this ill give you a thumbs up and say nice a few lull's in the story that make you wonder if that was all the action but just enoug... view book

not really much i can say but wow you started semi slow and built to a wonderful action non stop read kept me wondering and waiting to see what would happen next nice discriptions and full details that pulls you along waiting to see whats next will rate and put on my shelve THE BEAST view book

i feel you did a good job in your book so far well written and very enjoyable will watch for more to come so i can read it :)))) only thing of ? is the length of the paragraph's a few miss spelled words but that no biggy i'd buy a copy of the finished product for my personal library THE BEAST ... view book