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Hey everyone. I want to thank everyone who has backed and commented on Citizens of Earth so far. I really do appreciate it, but I have noticed that some are more focused on grammar and punctuaion instead of the story itself. I do know that you mean well, but please keep comments on the story and not on any small errors such as those. I already know that they are there and they will be edited. Right now I am just focused on finishing the story, revision will come after that. Again I do appreciate all comments, but I would just like to know what you all think of the story, the characters, dialogue and such.

Thanks so much,
Mercedes

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