Hey, Well done. You've managed to make my eyes bleed. From your perspective, my reaction should be viewed as a good thing, as I have a very, very strong aversion to all things chicklit...in other words: if I hate it, there's an excellent chance that average readers of the genre will love it. ... view book

Hey H, I love the premise of your book. It reminds me of something very topical: Herman Hesse's bones being dug up, cremated, and dumped at sea. Yeah, I know, a tenuous link perhaps, but that's what initially came to mind. Your style leans towards the poetic, therefore it is quite verb-hea... view book

I like the idea of your book very much. 'Misty Lane' sounds like one of those porn-star names people come up with when asked to add the name of their first pet to that of their mother's maiden name; and I was struck by the coincidence of your MC attending an event hosted by who I believe will turn o... view book

You have a traditional storytelling style. I like it very much. Your enthusiasm for your subject matter comes through clearly on the page. All you need now are a few hints and tips from a professional editor; but even if you are disappointed again this month, you should be aware that the world needs... view book

Dear Gooner, Here we are again. The same holds true as before: this book is disgusting, it's unnecessary, it's degrading, the violence, especially against women and children, is there purely for the sake of controversy... At least those are all things one would believe if one didn't bother to act... view book