Hi Karen, Another YA reader reporting here. First of all, let me say that I enjoyed what I read but I have a few comments to make too, which I hope will be useful. There is some very nice use playful usage of language although the rhyming got on my nerves a little and the play on words with "head"... view book

I've read the first five chapters of this and it has me in its grip. You write beautifully and the "News speak" in the first chapter is great. I got to the point recently where I thought that if I heard another "anchor" on TV talking about "loved ones" I'd be sick. It's so superficial. Then I came b... view book

Hi Deveril, Thanks so much for backing Haggis, I really appreciate it! I've just started reading this and so far I like it. I agree with other comments though. "the little girl" grated a little. You've got some lovely language here though. I'll be back later! Sharon :) view book

I've only just read the beginning and I have to leave it and go out. But I'll be back. The dialogues work well and the school scene too. You've got my interest and I wish you good luck. Be back later. view book

I've read three chapters of the book and enjoyed it a lot. The voice is just right and that's not an easy thing to do. I've put you on my watch list. Good luck, Sharon :) view book