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I am willing to swap reads.

I have two very diverse stories posted here. One is a Christian based fantasy of a talking sheep who wants to be a wolf. Young Adult to Middle Grade level. It gets emotional and a little violent, maybe PG for isolated wolf violence. It parodies a good kid joining a gang. Timothy, by looking like a wolf is perceived to be one. Through a series of fibs and accidents, he not only joins the Pack, but convinces many that he is a "wolf's wolf". At first it is the answer to TImothy's dreams, but joining the gang becomes the worst choice of his life.

A Sheep in Wolf’s Clothing - This complete and I am seeking either a publisher, or will explore self-publishing at some point.



My second novel is a science fiction story where I have striven to compete with CJ Cherryh in the creation of a viable alien culture and believable alien personalities. I hope my readers find them intriguing.

I develop many threads in this story all around the globe as I follow individual scientific, political, and military characters through the rising turmoil that competing to be the first to contact an alien race would cause. Individuals who will, live and die, resist or surrender, love and hate,... in short human beings with failings and lives that are all interupted by events they struggle to control.

Even in the midst of conquest, these two races are about to discover a shocking revelation that will shatter both the clones of the Hive and humans of Earth forever.



favourite books

Narnia, By C.S. Lewis
Lord of the Rings, By Tolkien of course.

Tad Williams and Brandon Sanderson
I'm looking for another favorite author or two, if anyone has a suggestion.

I recommend:

The Christian Lit Forum
http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/90961/christian-lit-forum/

The Alliance of World Builders
http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/83246/the-alliance-of-worldbuilders-part-ii/

my websites

http://www.authonomy.com/books/34938/a-sheep-in-wo     http://616097178901286164.weebly.com/

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my books

A Sheep in Wolf's Clothing

Barnard Cullen

Timothy’s a sheep who dreams of being a wolf. He runs away to become one, but the grass is not greener and events turn deadly.


Timothy Sheep is bored with the peaceful Meadows and frustrated with Orthodox-sheep telling him what he can’t do. His parents don’t understand him and he’s picked on by bullies. He dreams of becoming a fearless wolf and teaching everyone a lesson, then he finds a wolf-skin …

Through adventures and misadventures, plus some creative lying and bluffs, Timothy joins the Wolf Pack. He finds ‘clothes do make the sheep’. Dressing and acting like a wolf transforms him into one. After he’s accepted, he discovers other wannabe-wolves have slipped in, too. Soon, Timothy’s enjoying the wild-life, howling and playing with friends late as he wants. He’s living his dreams.

But dreams become nightmares as the wolves’ brutal nature is revealed. With wolves killing wolves, can a ‘SHEEP IN WOLF’S CLOTHING’ survive? Too ashamed of his actions to return home to the Meadows and Flock, can Timothy protect his new girl or any of his wannabe friends? Soon he’s changed irrevocably as he’s forced to fight for his life. Will he live to learn any lessons from his wolf experiences?

Parodying gang involvement and its violence, this story is suitable for Middle-Grade and Christian markets.

 

The Flight of the Hive

Barnard Cullen

The clone-warriors of the Hive, sent by the Great Mother to subjugate Earth must confront a crisis dwarfing their 200-year intergalactic war with The Enemy.


VETA, clone in the Hive Mother's mighty space fleet, the Flight, is sent through worm-space to an insignificant solar system to conquer yet another minor world. She struggles to deal with a difficult and jealous consort, matters of sacred honor (khree), and Subjugation of a planet. An Emergence accident alerts the planet's rulers, but they're primitives... right?
The American President discovers a brief flash in space brings with it First-Contact with extraterrestrials in the form of an invasion fleet of massive proportions. Will Earth's raging politics and power struggles turn to alliances as the Hive arrives to begin Subjugation?
Mechanical engineer GARRET wishes he were doing more exciting things. Flirting with the secretary, Linda, causes a fight with his arrogant boss and gets him fired. Out to get some air, Garret looks up to see the invasion forces descending and becomes surrounded in battle. Can mankind resist the overwhelming assault?
This routine conquest suddenly goes awry, as clones and humans discover a shocking truth neither is prepared to accept, shattering both Hive and Humanity. Caught in an intergalactic war between the Hive and its nemesis, The Enemy, can both humans and clones accept the truth and survive annihilation. Or not?

 

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heres the link" http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/98312/chri....

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I started a new Childrens and YA thread about Christian Lit and our t....

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A polite request: If you have the time could you take a look at my bo....

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Hi Grey, I just wanted to stop by and thank you for your amazing s....

Dr. J wrote 11 days ago

Dear Barnard: Permit me the audacity to suggest that you write TWO b....

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Hi Paul, Interesting. A pscho serial killer dead guy. Nice touch calling him the “dead guy” over and over. I do wonder why the Governor is the boss of a detective, but otherwise, it seems to work well. The banter Kevin and his partner, Jon, seems normal. The Undertaker character was unique, but C... view book

I wrote 13 days ago

Hi Dr. J After your first special exercise, you talk about Ashley and her problems. I noted there wasn’t any discussion of a resolution to them, or specifically, how God had assisted thi person. Is there more to the story of Ashley that may fit into your workbook? As you go through each section, I... view book

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Oops. Should have said, "YARG" on that last review.' Thanks Sharda. view book

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Mr. Unusually The very first line could imply she does this with many bears all the time. I would suggest that it read, “…dancing with her polar bear…” You start with a tremendous hook. The writing is clear and well constructed too. I found Don’s guilt over the misplaced gun to fit in well. When ... view book

I wrote 15 days ago

Good story. She finally starts to click with her boyfriend. That is written in well. The guy at the end of chapter 14 was creepy, like Miah said. Then the scenes with her being kidnapped and her parents' panic was absolutely riveting. When she awoke in the car, I thought you used her grandfather in ... view book

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