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Engaging story. I quite like the manner in which you have wound up the tale. Thanks for sharing. view book
Your prose is absolutely enchanting. But if you allow me, the narrative, despite its richness, is becoming a bit description heavy. I'm not too sure if you need to show her internal feelings in such overwhelming details. Now that's just one opinion, which is not the best. Nevertheless, I'm enjoying ... view book
Al, this is so very different from what I've read of you. Much polished and quite engaging. I especially like the beginning, so eloquently described. Will read more later. Cheers. Ravi view book
I thought I could write better, but not after reading this. The opening, fantastic, the text rich, and the descriptions so alive. You've captured the little girl's thoughts and feelings wonderfully well. Cheers. Ravi Bedi view book
