This story has all the makings of a really cute, fun read. I can easily see it as one of those books that comes through a mail subscription publisher for women. My one complaint is that you're moving it a little too quickly. Your readers need time to acclimate to changes in plot, location, etc. ... view book

I think this book has a really great set-up! I love the romantic thriller vibe you're aiming for. My one big criticism is about your sentence structure. Some of your sentences get very long-winded and have multiple clauses, which can be very difficult for a reader to follow; other times, you get ... view book

In my own personal opinion, you're trying very hard to make this book sound "smart." I see where you're coming from, but the first few paragraphs made me want to quit reading. Not only do you sound like you've swallowed a thesaurus, but you use such words (paradox, disparity, simulated) multiple t... view book

Your story captures my attention with the great writing. Watch the length of your sentences; they tend to be lengthy, although correctly punctuated. It just makes it easier for your reader. This book would be much easier to read in print form, so I wish you the best of luck. Backed, Sarah view book

Historical fiction is a difficult genre for trying to mix the factual with the entertaining. I found your book very enjoyable, and I have just one problem with it. I really think that pretending to be a historical figure leaves you in a bad position; you're taking liberties with the life of a per... view book