One of my favorite passages from Faust's Butterfly is in the paragraph that begins with "Paradise". "Here the magnificent black walnut trees, some of the finest in the world, breathed their slow breaths in the still, moist air, as they had been breathing since the Renaissance, when North Americ... view book

I understand you don't need any more comments, but I'll leave a quick one to say I'm enthralled with you book. MDEyler (I aspire to write this well) view book

Everything is facinating about The Somnambulist. First in Trinidad, and later in Barbados, a boy suffers form racial discrimination because of mixed heritage. His moments are shadowed by a guiding spirit called Maboya that has been a companion to generations of his people. This story draws the read... view book

You paint a portrait of depression for Chris, your mc, that is beyond the typical blues into the clinical state. He seems disconnected with his parents although his mother seems to try to help on some level. The car, supposed to be the cure, helps to a point. That type of mental problem doesn't go a... view book

You attempted to write humor and succeeded. This is hilarious! I think that conveyance of humor is the most difficult task a writer can face. Well done indeed. MDEyler view book