We have a winner. It's only a matter of time before this is published. Clever, funny and expertly written. Fred is a fantastic character. You have managed to create something truly original out of a well-worn genre and that is no mean feat. I'm looking forward to seeing how Fred develops as the plot... view book

Reminds me of Tom Sharpe in it's mannerisms and comedic edge. A very enjoyable read that's well written, particularly the dialogue (the cops sound like cops) and a great end to chapter 1. Good stuff. view book

Hi Aubrey. Firstly I have to say I enjoy your writing style very much. The narrative and descriptive usage seem very natural, nothing appears forced or jarred. The descriptive passages scan very well and your dialogue, particularly in the opening chapter, builds a great three-dimensional profile of ... view book

A shrewd choice to pick social networking as the basis of a plot about love and it's distancing effects. There are many parallels to consider which you build up nicely in the opening chapters. The Facebook-style dialogue is convincing and real which adds to the feel of the narrative. I particularly ... view book

This is fascinating stuff. When taken into context in what is fast becoming a more dangerous world to live in I think that this book has a genuine validity. Personally I'm also finding it incredibly educational concerning subjects such as 'reasonable force' and what constitutes self-defence (the cas... view book