DF, Your descriptions are so vivid that it is very easy for the reader to imagine the scene. With the exception of some minor punctuation and spelling errors, which I'm sure you'll catch during the revision stage, your writing skills are nothing short of excellent. I applaud you for creating... view book

Hi G E., At first glance, this appears to be a good story, but I have to admit that I see some things that really need to be corrected. If I may, and I don't mean to be too critical, here's a short list. - The pitch does nothing to entice me to read the story. It's doesn't draw me in or mak... view book

Hi lain, Current I'm reading "Tutankhamun: The Book of Shadows" by Nick Drake, which is a fantastic read. While perusing your story, I found a few similarities, but truthfully, I found your writing to be lacking that flair or something special that you see in a really good novel. I don’t mea... view book

Weekend in Weighton had me laughing from the onset. The gritty, down to earth, wit enhances the story telling with a flair not often seen. The characters are well rounded, especially Jimmy. This has all the makings of a really good book. Backed with pleasure! Tom [Humanoids] view book

Dan, what you have here with 'To Kill a Dead Man' is fantastic. I agree that some of the scene setting is a bit overdone, but this is certainly something I would want to read and I enjoyed what you have posted. Well done. Tom [Humanoids] view book