Overall I found your story engaging, specially for the age group you are writing for. At times I found the sentence structure to be too simple for my taste, but then again I was never one for reading age-appropriate novels when I was younger. I did notice a couple of times you got into the habit of ... view book

There are a few things I liked about your writing, and a few things I didn't. First, I love the name of your main character. Is there any chance a connection is going to be made with the real life Micheal Faraday (scientist- worked with magnetism)? Also, you have done the research necessary and f... view book

Your first chapter is good. I found the dialog believable, which is good since it's so prevalent. The only problem I found is that it was a little confusing when he begins talking to Hannah. The paragraph which begins, The Israelite didn't pause for breath left me confused. How it switches right awa... view book

A BHCG review I read the first couple of chapters and I liked what I read. The only nitpicks I could make were a very few grammar mistakes, but they weren't anything serious. What I really liked was how character driven your story is. It was refreshing to read a story in which the story deve... view book

A BHCG Critique Plot- Judging from the pitch the overall plot seems like a doozy. And from the chapters that I read it seems as though you move along at a nice pace, with all thought and action mapped out in advance. Pacing- It seems to flow out a nice even keel. Events happen, but they aren'... view book