Kim As someone has pointed out below, this is similar to the "Heroes" series, which i absolutely loved. However, your characterisation and in-depth explanation of what is happening to Sam is much better and has the reader certainly intrigued. Your descriptions of his feelings and your writing ski... view book

I like the pace you have set with this book, something I'm not used to seeing. Normally there's so much drama going on in this first chapter. But you set a slow, steady pace to keep the reader definitely wanting to read on.I was onto ch4 before i knew it. There's also a lot of tension building and t... view book

Hi JJ I have read your first two chapters and certainly did enjoy the read. Your writing style is very easy to follow and i have no nitpiks regarding grammer, punctuation or anything. There is alot of suspense and the reader definitely wants to carry on reading.There is only one thing i would say... view book

Excellent stuff and an ingenious way of putting a number of very talented writers into one book. I've read a few chapters now and was simply engrossed in all of them. This will definitely be a seller! Good luck! view book

Hi Cara I've read the first 2 chapters so far. your writing skills are excellent for your age. Ch1 pulls the reader in and it all flows so well. I'm sure this will go far. Good luck view book